Analysis of Breakfist



Breakfast
By:Luke Breen
An egg isn’t lunch
Isn’t it brunch
Instead of lunch
It doesn't really have a crunch
At least not like other food
No need to be crude
But that’s the wrong food dude
I know your in that kinda mood
And cooking is a bore
You just gotta go to the store
And buy more
It doesn't have to be a chore
You just got to know what you’re there for
You need more meat
Stop staring at your feet
Maybe get a treat
Let's go take a leap
Down the hall
There's no need to bawl
Your not going to fall
The list may seem tall
If you have questions give me a call
No need to stall
Do I look like a joke
You mom knows you smoke
So finish your last toke
At last you stand with your eyes awoke
Red from the smoke
Ready to be the joke
At the store
Once more


Scheme ABCCCCDDDDEEEEEFFFGHHHHHHIIIIIIEE
Poetic Form
Metre 10 11 1111 111 0111 11010101 1111101 11111 110111 11101101 010101 11101101 011 11011101 111111111 1111 110111 10101 11101 101 11111 111011 01111 111101101 1111 111101 11111 110111 111111101 1101 101101 101 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 731
Words 161
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 33
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 584
Words per stanza (avg) 160

About this poem

It's about this person's mom making them go get some more food from the store.

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Written on July 13, 2021

Submitted by lbreenr1998 on July 14, 2021

Modified on March 21, 2023

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