Analysis of anagotadavita (in the garden of eden)



in his image you are formed
mighty works you can perform
his embodiment's complete in you
I'm  but your helpmeet, it is true.

after seven days of practice
god prepared to make his kin
you're the essence of his glory
I'm just lost in your garden.

and the hemlock is your fury
and the grapes--they are your grace
in the moment I existed
I was blessed to see your face.

and the lions bow before you
and the wolves all fear your name
without you I'm nonexistent
all I bring to you is shame.

you are god's highest creation
with out you I don't survive
but all I brought to you was sin
when from your rib I was derived

in the garden of eden you made me
in the garden of eden I followed
from the garden i have wandered
you're not meant to be alone

and you clothed me
you clothed me
you clothed me in skins

when i fucked up
i fucked up
i fucked up and sinned.


Scheme XXAA XBCD CEXE AFXF DXBX CXXX CCX GGX
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Metre 0110111 1011101 110101 1111111 10101110 1011111 10101110 1110110 0011110 0011111 00101010 1111111 00101011 0011111 0111010 1111111 11110010 1111101 11111111 11111101 0010110111 0010110110 10101110 1111101 0111 111 11101 1111 111 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 823
Words 171
Sentences 5
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Written on July 06, 2021

Submitted by secretina on July 13, 2021

Modified by secretina on July 23, 2021

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