Analysis of Last Day of June
I need to screem, to still the silence, that seems to chase the shadows over the tombstones of your presence.
My body is drenched with your scent. My heart's dying, on you it was spent.
Take my soul from me, I no longer want to be free. Hold it tightly. Tenderly. Share with me, the darknesses blackened majesty.
Oh, darkened Angel. Shed your light all over me. Let your blood cover me, and stay.... just for today. Say you'll take me far away, where we will lie and die together, if we may. To live again in death bosom, where we shall play. And somehow, we will find our way to live forever in Love's glow. Tell me now. Let this be so. Take all the colors from my rainbow. This is what I need the most, you know. This you most surely, know....
How beautiful is your darkness ....so stained with blood, its blackness is dripping wetness, and if I could, I would feel your soul touch mine with the steadfastness of your emptyness.
There is the strength of air, that helps me to know I am sure, your touch let's me know you care...you rise and
lead me where the angels are crying tears, watering the dead flowers in bloom as death welcomes us, so soon, to soon, for this parting.....on the last day of June.
| Scheme | A X X X A XX |
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| Metre | 11111101011110110011110 11011111111011111 111111110111111101001110110100 11010111110111110101110111111011111010101111101011011110111110111010011111111111010111111110111111101 11001110111111011010011111111111010111 11011111111111111111110 111010110110001100111101111111101111 |
| Characters | 1,237 |
| Words | 243 |
| Sentences | 24 |
| Stanzas | 6 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2 |
| Lines Amount | 7 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 131 |
| Words per line (avg) | 33 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 152 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 38 |
About this poem
June was the month of my dear Grandma Pauline's birth. For that reason it has always been special to me. And in my life, many things started or ended in June. So I leave the reader with the following thoughts: what would be your thoughts on the last day of June?
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Written on March 19, 2020
Submitted by b4melodyonline on July 07, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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