Analysis of LOCKED DOWN; LOCKED IN
When Dopey Dan shouts, "Lockdown!"
We find ourselves locked in,
With Link taking a holiday
They've knocked us on the chin.
Kayoed by Dan and Link
With my larder completely bare,
When I ask for succor
They say they won't come here.
"Get yourself a taxi, man
And pay right through the roof,"
They say, while almost laughing
In voices distant and aloof.
Without my medication
I beg them to take me there,
But saying, "No! No! No!"
It's plain they just don't care.
So on my measly pension
For a badly damaged back,
I'm paying for a taxi
'Cause Link's on the wrong track.
They should be there to help us
When Danny locks us down,
But instead, they're gallivanting
About the wrong side of town.
"No, we cannot help you
Because we just don't care!"
Is their sad admission as
The ugly truth is laid bare!
THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | ABXB CDXX XEXE FDXD FGXG XACA XDXD XXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110111 1100110 1110010 111101 11101 11100101 111110 111111 1010101 011101 111110 01010001 011010 1111111 110111 111111 1111010 1010101 1101010 111011 1111111 110111 10111 0101111 111011 011111 1110101 0101111 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 886 |
Words | 166 |
Sentences | 13 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 31 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 87 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 20 |
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When Dopey Dan shouts, "Lockdown!" We find ourselves locked in, With Link taking a holiday They've knocked us on the chin.
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Written on June 30, 2021
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on July 04, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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