Analysis of BLUE SPOON

JP. 1948 (United Kingdom)



Each time I use that plastic spoon
The knife and fork now lost
I think that you grew up too soon
A childhood short riposte

And as I stir my morning tea
With that blue spoon that’s left
To wonder if you think of me
Your presence now bereft

I ponder why I bought that set
A knife, a fork and spoon
Your mother bought a pink layette
That sung another tune

I always knew you’d be a boy
Though midwives thought a girl
And spent the night in abject joy
When you came to this world

I taught you how to clear life’s plate
And reach an adult state
And nurture well each growing word
Your small life contemplate

But now to grow and fly this nest
Will this blue spoon attest?
To leave behind this safe cocoon
And one who did his best

So if we quarrel not to speak
By some imagined freak
Be sure I will be there for you
No sage by this mystique

Yet you were mine when I was you
Time guardians’ force construe
No one shall harm you whilst I live
Nor love you as I do.


Scheme ABAX CDCD XABA EXEX FFXF GGAG HHIH IIXI
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 11111101 010111 11111111 01101 01111101 111111 11011111 110101 11011111 010101 1101011 110101 1111101 11101 01010101 111111 11111111 011011 01011101 11110 11110111 111101 11011101 011111 11110111 110101 11111111 111101 11011111 1100101 11111111 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 948
Words 198
Sentences 3
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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