Analysis of Spiritual Crystallinity



Did you embed me? Tell me, dark world.
Did you lose track of time? Tell me, dark world - is it all just a lie?
I put my faith into all these years, to be with you, dark world.  
Tell me, dark world, where do we go from here? Now you're resting in crystalline arms, in no fear or harm.

Waiting, praying, lost in this fright, you have to come and find me, into showing me to the crystalline light.
Why did you leave me, in this world all alone, in a first degree of crystallinity?
Can't you see all these tears, I've shed for you, all along, to bring you to the pristine height of tranquility?
I never wanted this. I can't move on, your embrace I miss. I'll say a prayer for you, and wait for the day, I'll be with you, in your structure of crystallinity?

Straying, praying, taking and laying, losing my self into the night of the crystalline light.
Candlelight, burning and melting away finitely on my transition through the maze that’ll find me, on the forever winding road to show me to the light of the crystalline might.

And now I can see, that you are here. You joined me me on my journey, all alone and so very far from home.
You have joined me, have prayed for me, because the tranquility of your internal and metaphorical dictates the structure of your Crystallinity.
I'll live my life now - I know how your light, provides me with the fight, to expunge this plight that is the mere sight of the crystalline night.


Scheme AXAX BAXA BB XAB
Poetic Form
Metre 110111111 1111111111111101 111101111111111 11111111111110010101111 1010101111110110110110101 111110111010010111 11111111111011111010110100 110101111110111110111011011111011011 1010100101011010110101 1010010011110101011111001010111110110101 011111111111111101010110111 111111110100100110100010001010111 1111111111011101101111101110101
Characters 1,416
Words 269
Sentences 19
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 2, 3
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 84
Words per line (avg) 21
Letters per stanza (avg) 273
Words per stanza (avg) 67

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Submitted by jackversion9 on June 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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