Analysis of Are You Really Busy?



Are we pretending to be busy?
Or are we merely being lazy?

Potato couch in the making
Having no time, we are faking

Engrossed are we in the virtual world
Reality bites and beneath us is curled

Relationships which used to be magical
Have been lost and  become whimsical

We are more bothered about appearance
Moral values, ethics into disappearance

We forget our family, friends and peer
For we fear that we would be in the rear

Hardly do we have time for expression
On our toes,striving andin depression

Running for the rat race is the tension
Of stresses and lows we hardly mention

Let's stop and look within us
Realize we are are not busy, it's just a fuss

Let's enjoy the bountless beauty of God
Give in to the pleasures and give it a nod


Scheme AA BB CC DD EE FF GG GG HH II
Poetic Form Couplet 
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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 730
Words 138
Sentences 3
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted by drmedhavi on June 13, 2021

Modified on March 30, 2023

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Dr. Medhavi Chourey

VISITING FACULTY – Communication Skills, Grooming and Personality Development( MP Tourism) (IHM) - 10 years and MPIHTTS Ph.D., English Literature, Bhopal University. M.Phil., Psychology, Bhopal University.1989. MBA (HR) Profile at a Glance Proactive, persevering educationist armed with a doctorate degree in English Literature and 25 years of experience in imparting effective trainings on communication skills and personality development. Wrote a book of poems - UNSPOKEN SILENCES Written my father's biography- MY FATHER MY SUPERHERO more…

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