Analysis of OUT OF THE DARKNESS



Out of the darkness comes a creature
From some misbegotten time,
Crawling, slinking, creeping
From some foul primordial slime.

Lurking in dark alleyways
Hoping soon for passers-by,
The unsuspecting walk the lane
And from the dark a hellish cry.

A cry to chill the very marrow
Of the bones of any human being,
Out of the darkness comes a fiend
The like of which you’ve never seen.

Nightmare creatures come to life
As darkness takes command,
And terror from some twilight world
Stalks across the darkened land.

A horror from some far-off realm
Of a madman’s worst nightmare,
Leathery flippers, scaly wings
Squid-like beaks that gnash and tear.

Locked indoors the human beings
Cringe and cower till daylight,
Lest they peer through the curtains
And may die of craven fright.

Nothing living dares to move
And crying fills the midnight sky,
Loathsome creatures prowl the dark
And innocents will cruelly die.

Midnight is a time of weeping
In this town that’s lost to fear,
Through the night a hopping, slithering
As unnameable creatures near.

Windows rattled, doors are shaken
By some unseen passing beast,
Shrilling fills the midnight sky
At last, the creature gets to feast.

A wayward worker lost to time
Too late to safely reach his home,
Obscene slurping fills the night
Malignant creatures crunch wet bones.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XABA XCXC XBXX XDXD XEFE FGXG XCXC BHBH XICI AXGX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 110101010 110101 10110 11101001 100110 1011101 0010101 01010101 011101010 1011101010 11010101 01111101 110111 110101 0101111 1010101 01011111 10111 1001011 1111101 1101010 101011 1111010 0111101 1010111 0101011 1010101 01001101 1101110 0111111 101010100 11101 10101110 1101101 11011 11010111 01010111 11110111 011101 01010111 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,342
Words 229
Sentences 11
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 43
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 21

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Out of the darkness comes a creature From some misbegotten time, Crawling, slinking, creeping From some foul primordial slime.

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Written on May 25, 2011

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on June 11, 2021

Modified on May 03, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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