Analysis of CITY OF CRYSTAL



City of crystal
Transparent Buildings,
Housing crystal furnishings.

Crystal statues stand
In almost all rooms,
Or are they sleeping people?

Outside crystal beasts
Statues or sleeping creatures?
Difficult to tell.

In the city stand
Crystalline towers that sing,
As the wind passes.

Beyond the city
A crystalline forest,
Home to the animals?

Strange high-pitched squeals
Emanate from the forest,
Perhaps the crystal beasts?

Did a statue move slightly?
Are they waking up,
Crystalline people?

Did an animal
Move ever so little outside,
As daybreak comes?

As the 'people' rouse
You hastily retreat,
Wary of the beings.

As you step outside
The crystal animals stir,
You run to the trees.

Unknowing what waits
In the crystal forest,
Death or sanctuary?

THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme ABB CXA DXX CXX EFX XFD EXA AGX XXB GXX XFE XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10110 01010 1010100 1011 0111 1111010 11101 111010 10011 00101 101011 10110 01010 01010 110100 1111 101010 010101 101110 11101 1010 11100 11011011 111 10101 110001 101010 11111 0101001 11101 01011 001010 11100 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 788
Words 129
Sentences 14
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 55
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

Sequel to Crystalline Towers.

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Written on June 04, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on June 04, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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