Analysis of How long must I wait

Andy Lyle 1951 (Londonderry)



How long must I wait
 For my life to begin
My patience was good
But it’s now wearing thin

I’ve asked for so little
To spare me this hell
All I want is a clear head
For me to be well

I get up in the morning
To welcome the Sun
Hoping today is the day
When I’ll start to have fun

But I’ve no sooner dressed
And knotted my tie
When the panic sets in
And I think I will die

My body is shaking
I’m struggling to breathe
My heart is pounding
To the beat of my knees

I just want to sit down
And block out all the noise
Wait for shaking to stop
I have no other choice

Breathe deeply and slowly
Till the panic subsides
And wait till the next time
Mind and body collide


Scheme XAXA XBXB CDXD XEAE CXCX XXXX XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (57%)
Metre 11111 111101 11011 111101 111110 11111 1111011 11111 1110010 11001 1001101 111111 111101 01011 101010 011111 110110 110011 11110 101111 111111 011101 111011 111101 110010 101001 011011 101001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 644
Words 140
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted by andylyle1 on June 01, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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