Analysis of The Days

Edwin Muir 1887 (Orkney) – 1959 (Cambridge)



Issuing from the Word
The seven days came,
Each in its own place,
Its own name.
And the first long days
A hard and rocky spring,
Inhuman burgeoning,
And nothing there for claw or hand,
Vast loneliness ere loneliness began,
Where the blank seasons in their journeying
Saw water at play with water and sand with sand.
The waters stirred
And from the doors were cast
Wild lights and shadows on the formless face
Of the flood of chaos, vast
Lengthening and dwindling image of earth and heaven.
The forest's green shadow
Softly over the water driven,
As if the earth's green wonder, endless meadow
Floated and sank within its own green light.
In water and night
Sudden appeared the lion's violent head,
Raging and burning in its watery cave.
The stallion's tread
Soundless fell on the flood, and the animals poured
Onward, flowing across the flowing wave.
Then on the waters fell
The shadow of man, and earth and the heavens scrawled
With names, as if each pebble and leaf would tell
The tale untellable. And the Lord called
The seventh day forth and the glory of the Lord.

And now we see in the sun
The mountains standing clear in the third day
(Where they shall always stay)
And thence a river run,
Threading, clear cord of water, all to all:
The wooded hill and the cattle in the meadow,
The tall wave breaking on the high sea-wall,
The people at evening walking,
The crescent shadow
Of the light built bridge, the hunter stalking
The flying quarry, each in a different morning,
The fish in the billow's heart, the man with the net,
The hungry swords crossed in the cross of warning,
The lion set
High on the banner, leaping into the sky,
The seasons playing
Their game of sun and moon and east and west,
The animal watching man and bird go by,
The women praying
For the passing of this fragmentary day
Into the day where all are gathered together,
Things and their names, in the storm's and the lightning's nest,
The seventh great day and the clear eternal weather.


Scheme ABCBXDDEXDEAFCFGHGHIIJKJLKMNMNL GOOGPHPDHDDQDQRDSRDOTST
Poetic Form
Metre 100101 01011 10111 111 00111 010101 010100 01011111 1100110001 1011001100 110111100111 0101 010101 11011011 1011101 10001001011010 01011 101001010 1101110101 1001011111 01001 10010101001 10010011001 011 11101001001 1010010101 110101 01110100101 11111100111 0110011 010110010101 0111001 0101010011 11111 010101 1011110111 01010010001 0111010111 01011010 0101 1011101010 0101010010010 01001101101 01011001110 0101 11010100101 01010 1111010101 01001010111 01010 1010111001 010111110010 10110010011 0101100101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,972
Words 356
Sentences 10
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 31, 23
Lines Amount 54
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 779
Words per stanza (avg) 177
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:49 min read
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Edwin Muir

Edwin Muir was an Orcadian poet, novelist and translator, born on a farm in Deerness on the Orkney Islands. He is remembered for his deeply felt and vivid poetry in plain language with few stylistic preoccupations. more…

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