Analysis of The Combat

Edwin Muir 1887 (Orkney) – 1959 (Cambridge)



It was not meant for human eyes,
That combat on the shabby patch
Of clods and trampled turf that lies
Somewhere beneath the sodden skies
For eye of toad or adder to catch.

And having seen it I accuse
The crested animal in his pride,
Arrayed in all the royal hues
Which hide the claws he well can use
To tear the heart out of the side.

Body of leopard, eagle's head
And whetted beak, and lion's mane,
And frost-grey hedge of feathers spread
Behind -- he seemed of all things bred.
I shall not see his like again.

As for his enemy there came in
A soft round beast as brown as clay;
All rent and patched his wretched skin;
A battered bag he might have been,
Some old used thing to throw away.

Yet he awaited face to face
The furious beast and the swift attack.
Soon over and done. That was no place
Or time for chivalry or for grace.
The fury had him on his back.

And two small paws like hands flew out
To right and left as the trees stood by.
One would have said beyond a doubt
That was the very end of the bout,
But that the creature would not die.

For ere the death-stroke he was gone,
Writhed, whirled, into his den,
Safe somehow there. The fight was done,
And he had lost who had all but won.
But oh his deadly fury then.

A while the place lay blank, forlorn,
Drowsing as in relief from pain.
The cricket chirped, the grating thorn
Stirred, and a little sound was born.
The champions took their posts again.

And all began. The stealthy paw
Slashed out and in. Could nothing save
These rags and tatters from the claw?
Nothing. And yet I never saw
A beast so helpless and so brave.

And now, while the trees stand watching, still
The unequal battle rages there.
The killing beast that cannot kill
Swells and swells in his fury till
You'd almost think it was despair.


Scheme ABAAB CDCXD EFEEG HIHHI JKJJK LMLLM XGNNG OFOOG PQPPQ RSRRS
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11111101 11010101 11010111 1010101 111111011 01011101 010100011 01010101 11011111 11011101 10110101 01010101 01111101 01111111 11111101 111100110 01111111 11011101 01011111 11111101 11010111 0100100101 110011111 111100111 01011111 01111111 110110111 11110101 110101101 11010111 11011111 110111 1110111 011111111 11110101 01011101 1100111 01010101 10010111 010011101 01010101 11001101 11010101 10011101 01110011 011011101 001010101 01011101 10101101 1111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,724
Words 342
Sentences 25
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 50
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 02, 2023

1:43 min read
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Edwin Muir

Edwin Muir was an Orcadian poet, novelist and translator, born on a farm in Deerness on the Orkney Islands. He is remembered for his deeply felt and vivid poetry in plain language with few stylistic preoccupations. more…

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