Analysis of The foe beside you

GIDRAF MWANGI 1992 (Murang'a)



You smite him not
Yet he eats you most

You live and fare with him
Yet to know his intentions no whim

He is the dear one of you
Hating him a terrible hue

The meal, you share
Thus suspecting, rare

He laments while with you
Howling in flamboyance hitherto subdue

But will you abide with the devil
Belaying as buddy for you to marvel?

Beware of thine enemies
Be not you to give ‘em chance

© GIDRAF MWANGI


Scheme XX AA BB CC BB DD XX X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111 11111 110111 111101011 1101111 10101001 0111 10101 101111 1000101101 111011010 111011110 0111100 1111111 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 398
Words 79
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 40
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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