Analysis of growing pretzels



these demons are
chained
to an other
yet proclaim
freedom in you
self hating buddhists
eat pretzels
zennishly
self hating demons
in pie fights
lick each other clean
wash it down with seltzer
bottled water
fire hoses
comically but oh
they mean business
mischief and mayhem
fun is signature
victims are pretzels
to be eaten
saltless

we eat pretzels
in the presence of
strawberries
take a meat tenderizer
to the welcome mat
butcher the fatted
bead curtain
the prodigal demon
salivates

spit all your prayers
into bonfires
wishes are for fireplaces
not wells

baptism
in the pouring out
of waterfalls
communion in
the vine
beloved
you are mine

© John Kennan 3-12-21


Scheme ABCXXDEXXXXCCXXXXCEFD EXXAXBFFD XXXX XXXXGXG F
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 1 1110 101 1001 11010 110 1 11010 011 11101 111110 1010 1010 100011 1110 1001 11100 10110 1110 1 1110 00101 10 1011 10101 1001 110 010010 1 1111 0110 1011100 11 100 00101 110 0100 01 01 111 110
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 629
Words 112
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 21, 9, 4, 7, 1
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Modified on March 26, 2023

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