Analysis of Sense on leave



Sense on leave

Life grounded. Sounds of vehicles
Merge with cries of various classes and
Sameness shamelessly defeats the newness
of all kinds
Imprisoned in poisoned melancholy of frozen
thoughts
Icebergs are upside down smirking at the
mountains,
Silence measured, calculated.

On the other hand, leaves are drying up
Ponds, lakes covered with brown fatigue.
Sky laughs with innumerable teeth
Of basic hanging colors, white, black, gray,
Nothing rises above the focus. Faiths of
bullets, guns
And incredibly visible sharpness of arms
Are awed with respect from all corners;
Horizons have merged into a ball
Replete with the hunger of hired anger;
Known result of stagnation, starvation
Horror, terror has scrapped all other
Impotent words from the dictionaries.

Green leaves that dare to peek, rainbows
that connect
Troubled floors are royally ignored;
Dumped in the confines of writers
Never to be read or heard,
Creativity lies in the destruction of life.
The world that was born years ago
With a lot of care is all set to be
destroyed with intelligence,
On sabbatical smokes hibernates
the sense.


Scheme X AXXXBXXCX XXXXXCXDXEBEX XXXDXXXXXAX
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11011100 1111100100 1010001010 111 010010100110 1 1011111010 10 1010100 1010111101 11101101 111010001 1101010111 10100101011 101 001001001011 111011110 010110101 01101011010 1011010010 101011110 100110100 1111111 101 101110001 1001110 1011111 010010001011 01111101 1011111111 0110100 1010011 01
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,066
Words 177
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 9, 13, 11
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 225
Words per stanza (avg) 44
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Modified on April 01, 2023

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Supratik Sen

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