Analysis of 1 /28 /96 by dordrum2000

Daniel Morin 1975 (Manchester)



The rivers  drowning within me nothing  real all shattered  dreams made up in my mind im lost in a pit falling  fast nothing real nothing will last all to be left in someone else's past. The consequences  of thought screech to  a halt
A sudden surge beginning revolt words and speech  mean nothing to you hate left to unglue fear left to sit and  stew. No matter lives will shatter whos to care man's words to share emotions to fools feeling no rules. Caution  consistency's hoax life a curly cruel joke
Words left not to be spoke!


Scheme ABB
Poetic Form Tercet 
Metre 010100111011101110111100110110110111111011010100111101 01010100110111011111011111011101110111111101011101110111010101 111111
Characters 531
Words 97
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 140
Words per line (avg) 35
Letters per stanza (avg) 419
Words per stanza (avg) 106
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Submitted by Dordrum on May 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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