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Brokeneyetosour.txt

Daniel Morin 1975 (Manchester)

The minds dark world were i dwell. A dancing spiral in a shell;
Lost ludicrous mind
A neat new design
Lost few
Who is it
What is it
Feat distinction made clear watch tower  
made clear. Watch tower seared
Broken vine bruised ,time lost in myme.
What is it that lives yet don't
Who is it that lives  in  the  shadows between  me and you?
A space under darkend view. Eyes living  in  your stew??!
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Submitted by Dordrum on May 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEEFGHIDD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 388
Words 75
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
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