Soul_00
  Bronze Member

as we feel led to, we should share the 'truth' / gospel. the problem with sites like this is there is not always a lot of involvement by many in commenting, and so many poems posted each day, some multitude by the same poet at a time, that it's just too much to read through. recommend sites more like A.P. for more comments, possible more readers also. they require commenting there, so you know/ see your poems are being read, but not always a lot of thought about them could be, but just for to comment.

not sure this applies to your poem really at all - poems can be about many things or just thoughts that come to you out of thin air, but if any are experiencing such on this site, I recommend that they try other sites as well. more »

"Avoid short, ... comments and strive to contribute to the community's growth. Let's foster an environment where every poet feels valued and inspired."

to trully feel valued even the simplest talking writing kind of folks must be accepted also. otherwise some will not be saying what they real honest feel to say out of the niceness of their truth and being, but instead be struggle to make up stuff and become 'fake'. not a great thing for them, no matter what another should judge view them as. more »

very few it seems can even give for themselves to be noticed (with money) - on here. take note of the 'featured'. does this mean poets are more humble than people and organizations asking / wanting money... or just poorer? or not wanting to be seen so much, as to be read by people. more »

https://www.poetry.com/poem/192681/not-words (inspired by your poem - has been in drafts for awhile).

it takes more thought, not just to readl

I am not sure what means but it reads well. thanks.

they are not hearing the soul, they have lost that, they are just in the moment, the Earth, not of something more permanent, maybe they don't believe in God or spiritual things. they are of Earth. Of the ground. They looked around and this is what they found. They are now bound to it, lost through it, not blue enough from it all yet. more »

I believe Jesus said, "forgive them for they know not what they do". they might not.

can be hard to do, but imagine being different - like Jesus was. to think different, to see different .... with time ... to forgive ourselves, but try to what is right. to forgive others, because we too want forgiveness.... more »

I have heard that everyone is young in heaven (don't know if it's true).

Imagine 'god' coming again and again, feeling new each time, each generation alive like never before (with the advent of the internet suddenly staring into each other's faces seeing this newness /difference like never before). Or said another way, imagine consciousness coming here over and over again in myriad of various forms unending. Never perfect, always new for the ones living it out. Suddenly seeing itself all together in a different light than was recently seen/known (further back maybe happened in the past also), thinking it has /could find all the answers that the consciousnesses before it haven't. Still not perfect, still growing, not yet all- knowing? If it was perfect to know all the answers to life and how things should or should not be, would not be here.... Earth. more »

Do unto others? If it was us... how would we want to be treated in the 'before time's? Do people think this far, this deep, these ways, or are they half asleep? listening to the vibes of society and trends and things they are prone to, used to, drawn to, given to do, for they don't stop enough to think these ways, too deep, they float on by, with these times, tomorrow though may cry, some even before, but not enough help for the better way seen, found,lost, in this world, too much? Need more help, better kind of education? Less bad sayings and thinking's said to them, or in media, by friends also in need of; need a different support system, need a different world, better people. more »