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  August 2023     1 month ago

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Message in a bottle

There, there it is again,
Gentle, like two lovers finding each others skin for the first time,
Grabbing at my hands blind,,
And slowly engulfing the entirety of my arms,rising each hair ,
To share a cool whisper
Then vanishing through me
As...

– by Alcase Lorraine

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When the drought subsided I could have sworn,
Kids riding bicycles around the corner
Waved to me as if my house wasn’t two stories
Of beaten brick and morning glories,
Drying like sweet raisins,
Speckling the lawn in purple patches,
Where no...

– by Alcase Lorraine

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When the drought subsided I could have sworn,
Kids riding bicycles around the corner
Waved to me as if my house wasn’t two stories
Of beaten brick and morning glories,
Drying like sweet raisins,
Speckling the lawn in purple patches,
Where no...

– by Alcase Lorraine

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added 7 months ago
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Sunday morning

Sultry Sounds,
Shatter sleeping silence.
Sunshine slowly streams-
Seams of scattered sheet seas.
She’s standing, splendid, Singing,
Stolen slacked shirt,
Sausage skillets simmering-
Shimmering skin-
Sin secluded Somewhere.
Sitting, swirling...

– by Alcase Lorraine

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added 9 months ago
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Imagery of this poem is serene. The sensory of this one moment is transcribed beautifully and adding the contrast of feeling ,cold and warm, satin and cloth. It brings a new dimension to the poem that would otherwise be a simple scene of two lovers in a snowy wood. The bones of this poem are filled with this fiery moment and putting this setting in the snow is ingenious. 

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