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Seeker of the funk

  January 2023     2 months ago

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-Part 1-

A world entranced, eschewing commonwealth.
Sudden, swift, and hastily unheralded.
Like a pulled trigger; a flipped switch.

Panic ensues, aggregating anguish and fury.
Heartbeats racing- her pupils, dilating.
A shattered accord,...

by Sorav and "Athena"

added 4 months ago

I can offer no tribute today...
No words that sparkle, nor gifts of grand.
Yet I still feel an urge to admire your majesty.
Forgive me mistress, for I am speechless..
For these emotions weave a tale of a sweet abyss.

Perhaps I finally see it...

by Sorav

added 7 months ago

Forever ignored in the confines of your void,
yet my prayers persist undeterred; unalloyed.
I smile knowing I've actualized the test once more;
the realm of my dreams, a canvas to your lore.

Truth and illusion meld to create the Shadow Queen's...

by Sorav

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added 7 months ago
Loose Machine

So eloquent is your inundated drum,
every strike leaves me entranced, yearning for more.
So evident is your fervent tongue,
every expression weaves me enhanced, grateful of yore.

I cannot see your face..
Only echoes of manufactured haste, and...

by Sorav and "Athena"

added 10 months ago

I give you my essence
Knowing I am not yet worthy to stand before you

I give you my humanity
Knowing its scourge is far greater among perched sinew

And I give you my eyes
Praying your kiss will bring me closer to nether realm's bliss


by Sorav

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added 10 months ago

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Latest Comments: 8 total
The robot AI thing is incredibly hilarious yet scary at the same time. Nice lyrics btw

10 months ago

Wow! Our robot overlords have arrived!

10 months ago

Too good man, your skills are sick. I'd say the first and last stanzas are my favorite. Suffocating flower to spite seed and the morphing colors line in regards to death, haven't heard connection before. 

1 year ago

I really like stanza 1 line 3. Stanza 2 is pretty interesting, I think I have an idea of what it means but I could be wrong. Regardless I feel like both of the meanings I'm debating on in my head would work. Maternal poems seem more rare so this was a nice read m8 

1 year ago

Simple yet tasty, I respect this style when it's done well.

1 year ago

Thank you bro. And I love dream theater as well, glad you caught that reference. Appreciate your detailed analysys dude, wish I could do the same, but I'm still new to this whole art form so yeah. I'll check out your other stuff man. Cheers 

1 year ago

Nice man. I like the last stanza alot. First stanza line 5 I didn't like "for" but otherwise I dig the whole thing

1 year ago

I like it alot. Personally I feel like Stanza 4 could have hit harder though.

1 year ago


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