Terrye.62528's comments

Feeling that!...lovely lines, enjoyed the reading. Thank you.

How lovely, Short but good and well written..somewhere...liked it.

The perfect poem to read in the hush of

The lilac scent and, the ripple of the pond. Beautiful beginning that empowers the flow of this write...Inhale as time stands...still.
amazing !...stilled.,and like the Monarch.....Fantastic imagery, here
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A lovely write, here. Bursting with imagery, really quite relatable, with a good theme. Written well!
Good job,,,enjoyed the reading
Thank you.

Beautiful poem! So well written. Death's shadow falls. The 'o' refrain keeps it nice and tight...Good job...Enjoyed thank you.