Smahalanobis2008's comments

It's simply brilliant. What amazing simplicity!

I gratefully acknowledge the comments on my poems sofar, on the Fishes, and also on the Fire. I thank from my heart everybody who took time to think on my poem/s. Brilliant observations. I admire the critical analyses. These will enlighten me further to write more lucid. Thank you very much.

I look at life with hope and aspiration. Life is full of trials and errors, pangs and exuberance, success and failures, yet life goes on as it does as the continuous sequel of time. Fishes are symbols of tine and the exuberant life. They multiply with the ecological pull for continuity. Hence despondence does not have much longer space. This is my vision of life.

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A very good mastery in rhyming pattern. Congratulations for a good poem. Good morning from India.

In today's life innocence is often found lost in the cauldron of cunning ambition. Innocence of child is taken too often ignored. Innocence needs to be oprotected.

Thoughtful