Dogojim3's comments

Pretty imagery, pleasant rhyme and meter; it feels good to say it out loud. It paints a lovely picture of a country road, in autumn, in the evening.

Many of the entries are very dark, many contain good imagery but are unpolished, as if the author scribbled them down in a passion, but never went back to proofread or revise. Many are by women complaining of faithless love, accusing but lacking introspection. This poem has none of that. It has a single thought, concisely expressed, with consistent rhyme and meter and no tortured rhymes. more »