love fate



my love with you has a fate

although i really hate i am with you

a minute a year you leave and not a

period very great. i wish i mercy kill before

it is too late . i always miss you more and

much warmth i store but when i really

need you i see you close the door . a

miracle not to happen i let no one in

except you my love is big and true but

i know it wont win i know we are twin

a flame in me and you too good to be true

i hate it really that i cant be with you . i

really hate it that i am really weak with you

your feeling is to me important than the sea

for you to fight i need to be strong and tall

as tree but i am because of you so dull and

dont have what it take .. i wish it was a fake

i know the end is soon i cant see the moon.
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Submitted by fouz.medo on May 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X A B X C D B E X E A X A D X C X X
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 735
Words 173
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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