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A few things to share !!

Carl Hatter

I  have  a  few  words  to  share  with  you  and
Trust  me  they  are       strong !!!
But  please  understand  im  concerned  because
Eternity  never  ends !!!!!      and  that's a  long  time  to  be  wrong !!!!
                      please  hear  this   bit
Of  truth  jesus  died  upon  mount   calvary !!!!
And  was  then  raised  from  the  grave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
One  drop  of  the blood  of  jesus  is  all   thats
Needed !!!            to be   saved !!!!!
From  gods  wrath  that  will  soon
Come !!  in  the  tribulation !!!  but  even  further
In  christ  jesus we're saved from  damnation !!!!
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Submitted by Humpty1 on May 01, 2021

Modified on April 29, 2023

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Scheme ABCBDEFCGHIJ
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 596
Words 84
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
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  • PriscillaKing
    PriscillaKing
    Well...the exclamation marks add emphasis in a way that's not been identified with unholy anger.
    LikeReply2 days ago
  • apehoward1995
    apehoward1995
    Your words a true and ring throughout infinity
    LikeReply4 months ago
  • justine_g
    justine_g
    (please hear this bit
    Of truth jesus died upon mount calvary ) why did you belittle the truth in that stanza? otherwise your poem speaks nothing but the truth!
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • Pruett1023
    Pruett1023
    Yes, it is through Faith that we are saved by Grace. Keep on inspiring others to confess, repent and be baptized for eternal salvation.
    LikeReply5 months ago
    • Humpty1
      Humpty1
      YES AMEN WE MUST PREACH THE GOSPEL TO EVERY CREATURE
      LikeReply5 months ago
  • Adroity
    Adroity
    Your words carry a strong conviction and urgency, echoing the eternal significance of faith and the importance of being aligned with the truth. The message of Jesus' sacrifice on Mount Calvary and his resurrection resonates deeply with the core of Christian belief in redemption and salvation through his blood. Your emphasis on the simplicity of salvation through a single drop of Jesus' blood highlights the profound grace and mercy found in the Christian faith. The contrast between God's wrath and the salvation offered through Christ's sacrifice underscores the eternal stakes involved in embracing or rejecting this message of hope and redemption. Your passion for sharing this truth shines through, reflecting a deep concern for others' spiritual well-being and the eternal consequences of their choices. 
    LikeReply6 months ago
    • Humpty1
      Humpty1
      THANKS FOR YOUR ENCOURAGEMENT
      LikeReply5 months ago

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