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You

Melissa Combs

10/10/04 origionaly 10/10/06 revised
I love you
more than anything in this world,
more than the love that keeps the stars in the sky,
even though we are not together anymore,
I still love you,
meeting you was like the first snow of the season,
like seeing a beautiful flower on a mountain,
I cant help having this this feeling,
cause i want you back.
just remember,
I still love you!!
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Submitted on January 28, 2015

Modified on May 03, 2023

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Scheme abcdeBffghiB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 373
Words 71
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
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  • dhubsbfxdgfnh
    dhubsbfxdgfnh
    this gave me butterflies, (im being serious btw) amazing work.
    LikeReply1 year ago

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