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When It Actually Sunk In

Daniel Acorn

that my heroes p*ss and sh*t like me
 I let myself go limp and relaxed my eyes
 so that a real kind of sadness showed.

 Now I’m me on a grey pavement
 with grey people, under a grey sky –
 each of us very awake with sleepy eyes
 starving for dreams.
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Submitted on March 07, 2017

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Scheme XAX XXAX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 247
Words 51
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 3, 4
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Form and structure is meaningless, unless it means something to you. Let it out. Let it go. more…

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