When I see her first

Haridas Shyamkumar 1968 (Kallambalam, Kerala)



When I see her first,
Cute and smile towards me.
Innocent eyes staring me,
Talking lips hungry kiss.

Walking along with her aunt,
Smiling only when she meet.
Texting always loving heart,
Hungry for a sweeten kiss.

Day and night dreaming me,
Smiling always when she meets-
Whenever meet me talking sweet,
Till her heart is betray me.

When she gets time tell me sweet,
Can we go out for a dinner?
Japan, Korean, Indian foods-
She never like then pass to me.

When she join to my life,
Happy, jealous and dreaming nights,
Broken promise from her mouth,
Show me her lips only smile.

I think she will in my life,
Go with someone say a bye.
Broken heart mine forever,
Pain is too much think to die.

Haridas Shyamkumar
Copyright © 2012 Haridas Shyamkumar
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Submitted on October 11, 2012

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Scheme XAAB XCXB AXCA CDXA EXXX EFDF DD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 722
Words 136
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2

Haridas Shyamkumar

I was born in India. Now I am residing in Brunei Darussalam for doing business registered a corporate company by myself but always struggling for money at the early stages. My parents Mr.M.Haridas and Late Mrs.Vanjadas. They gave me all the opportunities to choose for all the best way by myself. I got the initiative from my loneliness and likeness of lovely peoples around me. I got the address of this poetry.com from one of my friend and I had approached with my first poem. I had published some of my poems in our local newspaper here in Brunei Darussalam. At any time you can contact me at: POST BOX:1115, BANDAR SERI BEGAWAN, BS8672, BRUNEI DARUSSALAM. Tel: 6738221114 Email: superpower007@hotmail.com more…

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