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ventilator vodoo

Thewordking Hljohnson

I just don't know what's in store
fate once again is knocking on my door
back to the hospital and under the knife
only to awake fighting for my life
with the ventilator as my best friend
16 weeks for me to mend
I wish my doctor could really tell
when I will escape this living hell
seems like i'm under an evil spell
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Submitted on April 25, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AABBCCDDD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 308
Words 64
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
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