The queen and slave 2 ( My pain )




S: They cut my right hand off from my arm by leaving me with a pain

 Q:  I wonder how will you be working in the castle with a pain that won't be   solve anymore

 S: no worries my queen I'm trying to retrain my other hand so I could have the horned to serve you in the castle

 Q: I heard that you got a hidden talent of writing greats poems about a woman like me with a heart starving fully sad to hear some greats poems to get back my heart beats hoping that won't remind of your pain

 S: Shame on those who didn't understood the true love you have to the king who keep moving forward with his blind steps by shooting the arrows on your heart to break it up so he won't fall in love anymore
And majesty my pain was caused only therefore I have stop writing about true love but they never realized that my heart is still beating with an anger of  making a new revolution of sounding out my poems about them crime to my pain

 Q: I have nothing to say because my feelings aren't patient to have you by me tonight even if you are a slave  to see if you are capable of hearing  me more of your love that the king never shared with me before  but first explained to me about who put you in that pain of cutting your hand

 S : the person who caused me the pain was  the king  who caused the pain of breaking your own heart by grabbing my woman by breaking  my heart with my eyes whom started being like an anger falls of tears from my eyes  and ordering  his men to cut my hand so I won't write  about the pain  he caused to me and true loves in my poems

 12/03/2012
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Ahmad Al_khatat

I started writing poems since I was ten years old, Most of my poems are free verse or proses.Which talked about sad dark and wild romance .Even some ones talking politics.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose_poetryhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_verse ahmad4all_2@hotmail.comMontreal - Canada Thank you more…

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