Revenge Coming From The Heaven



Just like when I love the sun raising
Up every morning. I felt in love with
You without a single clue.

Your face was always more brighter then the
Sun itself; which made me not able to see,
Although a slight of saddens upon your eyes.

I asked all the florists in town if they
Ever have a flower with the same scent
That you have on your clothing.

Your lips have a taste can't be compared
To any women I dated before, but I don't
Know why I removed the taste away of your lips.

I asked you to spent a night together so our
Love would unite warmer , you gave me a cleaner
Life portion so I could clean myself and bit of who I'm.

I did washed my body with the portion, a day before
I prayed for God to bring you back and to forgive my
Mistakes, so our night won't be recorded as a sin love.

You came up with a no respond of sleeping with me,
Knowing by I washed my body with love portion but
Not asking enough for forgives from God of my mistakes.

I realized that you were the same woman, who she loved
Me more than I did; our love that didn't stayed too long
Because I shoot you with my gun with only two bullets in the past.

I asked you to forgave me and come back to life again.
You answered is too late to get back and askGod about
Your needs, but surly God will do something.

I waited days and night with more praying to have you back
In my world again, until I gave up and pulled the trigger
with a last bullet inside the gun then it's over for me.

I went up in the heaven looking for you all over
Stopped after hearing that you went back to real life
God gave you another chance to enjoy the life.

I felt sort of sad and miserable after what I did. But
One an angle was pretty and saw me and told me
That was a mini revenge coming from heaven.

On my way to the hell, you came back to be with me
After noticing that you can't live by your own while I
Was a really better player, but I went crazy without you.

But now I'm happy that you came back to safe me from
The hell which I deserve to be there of my past, but since
No one is perfect but there moments to ask for forgiveness.

21/11/2013
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Submitted on November 25, 2013

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Scheme AXB XCX XXA XXX DDX XEX CFX XXX XXA XDC DGG FCX CEB XXX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,052
Words 429
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3

Ahmad Al_khatat

I started writing poems since I was ten years old, Most of my poems are free verse or proses.Which talked about sad dark and wild romance .Even some ones talking politics.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose_poetryhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_verse ahmad4all_2@hotmail.comMontreal - Canada Thank you more…

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