Someone I love



I'll tell you a story
About someone I love,
His been in my life
We're similar, kind of.
He can be quite funny
In the things that he does
And also quite silly
And this is because...
He does little things that makes me laugh,
He likes his few beers
And his very hot baths,
He drove an old larder
When I was so high
Its what I remember,
It's In my minds eye
When I was so little
I remember when we
Used to go to the park
What fun that would be.
We'd play in the snow
On a very cold day
And we'd throw lots of balls
And then he would say....
It's time to go home now
I need the toilet
So I thought in my mind
I'd try and spoil it
So I'd hold on his leg
Till he could hold on no more
I thought it would be funny
To see if he wet the floor!
The times that we had
This someone and I
How we laughed and we cried
When I said good-bye
He has a kind heart
He'd do anything for me,
He's someone I love,
He's called my daddy
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Submitted on June 20, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Characters 873
Words 199
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 39

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