Skin Comes Off



The skin comes off; ripped silently-slowly,
peeled by sanity's fractured somersaults,
it falls to the floor like spiralled feathers.

Tendons are pulled by needles of regret,
are snapped like a bow string; cold vibrations,
sound shatters the air with beautiful smiles.

Veins are gathered into small bloody balls
then thrown into a lost corner of love,
they sit in the dust of dead shadowed times.

Bones are broken; tiny pieces splinter,
larger ones wait to be gnawed by daylight,
the fluttered hounds of dawn's waterfall voice.

So all that is left now is who I am,
the spirit which sweeps along fine echoes,
personality that streamlines the mind.

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Submitted on June 04, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 631
Words 108
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3

Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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