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Shooting star

japanesewind

Will you marry me........yes
i lift you ...fly......to saturn....which ring do you want

laughing..you choose the one flowing with ice particles
a flick of the wrist casts my net.. Liquid light shimmers..glimmers on your hand

back in my arms....we trace an arc across the heavens.........below... On earth..they wish upon a star
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 10, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX AX X
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 323
Words 59
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1
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