Rush



streets are closed
parade in town, like the one
I saw once...in love...

a sudden rush, the past is calling, start fresh? maybe
border-line boring, encoring, 2 cents for scoring
like a missed bus, diss us, threw down the gauntlet, avoid the crush
for the one who stopped calling, knowingly, fold the royal flush
no wake up the next morning...
hello hello, smiles colored yellow, feedback for the fellow
who calls him mellow? no sleep on the other side of the medal
who cares about living on meadow, a widow next to empty window?
brings horror of life on a down low, another low blow makes you bow low
with an empty bowel, pass the towel, life gets crazy sometimes, so stay hollow
but never shallow, the day they meet, no words - just vowels...
and a life complete, for a moment of happy-ness, smooth finess, just enough
to keep it under excess...
always simple, always complex, no give or take, no pause no break
no applause no cake, just together, for good-godness-sake, sociatal fake, evanescent
like a dying snow-flake...never fate, always self-made - completion of a circle, very rare,
but always - great...

true lies, realize through wide open eyes, it's all good, there's no surprise...
return to everyday life in disguise, come back for more, an encore, behind closed doors,
keep the circle whole, or keep the heart with a hole...
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on April 04, 2023

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Scheme XXX XABBACXCCCXXXXXXX XXX
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,314
Words 235
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 17, 3

Didar Baizhanov

Somewhere between my birth in the land-locked nation of Kazakhstan and becoming U.S. Merchant Marine officer - poetry became something of a satellite in my travels through life ;) ____________________ My most sincere Thank You! for the feedback! ____________________ Here are some poems that I liked (here on Lulu), please give appropriate authors your comments if you get a chance:- October Hearts by PoetryofJune - High(Coup) by JayS (haiku) - Tranquility by Beccanine - Nemesis by Timothy Francis Savage - My Bright Place by Zenocyde - I Fought in a War by Justin R Esplin (haiku) - Love Blooms by Dee Edgett - A Haiku: Violin Music by Clara B. Ray - Cigarettes by faustus - Implode by Elise Hadden - Haiku: Violet Roses by PoetryofJune - The Friend I Didn't Want - Ryan Wong :) - Plus Infinity by Neli Fatu de Valahia - Never Good; Never Bad by Graham Geiger - Two Snowflakes by Kiran - With a grey sky by Spirals - Pine Needles by Matthew Lerette - Bound Again by Danny Warren Patterson - Lie-F by RomanoJohnson - A Child's Memory of a War by Change - A Cold November Day by Bonchance - El espejo roto (The Broken Mirror) by Taqua-------------------------------- more…

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