Perfection



Everything had to be right,
I had to be the right shape,
I had to be a particular figure,
this was how my hair needed to be,
everything had to be a definite way.

I had lost sight of the important,
instead I conformed to what the society wanted,
I lost my identity,
I lost my self worth.
I wanted to be perfect.

I took a look at myself,
in and out,
while I was chasing perfection,
I failed to realize,
I had become the person i have always wanted to be.

in my own way I was perfect.
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Submitted on September 28, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXAX XXAXB XXXXA B
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 466
Words 99
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 1

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