Not All Which Seem Well End Well



Be careful what you wish for;
You might end up with the devil and his pitchfork.
We asked for asphalt,
now we get asphalt.
The soles burning on Pit Street are all our fault.

Bare feet travel best on dirt road;
We acquire this wisdom ‘cause we’re dirt poor.
Everyone hollers with jubilation
when they imposed tolls on motorists
 to improve road condition.
 Now wretched tongues chorus in lamentation,
when naked soles touch red-hot asphalt.
The soles burning on Pit Street are all our fault.

Dirt-browned feet are more tolerable
 than the feeling of walking on hot coals.
The tepid earth is therapeutic to every sole.
Concrete can be cruel in the summer’s heat.
Warm dirt is pleasant between the toes.
Asphalt is no easy street.

Be careful what you wish for;
you might end up with the devil and his pitchfork.
We asked for asphalt.
Now we get asphalt.
The soles burning on Pit Street are all our fault.
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCCC xxdxddcC xxxexe ABCCC
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 884
Words 160
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 8, 6, 5

Earle Francis Brown

I was born in Montego Bay, Jamaica. I was told that I can write, so I wrote and continues to write. I am currently living in Cincinnati, Ohio, USA. I enjoy reading "real" poetry. My favorite books are the Pslams, Proverbs and Songs of Solomon.Poetry is not just vocabulary, and use of metaphors and formats. Don't be tricked. Poetry should speak life. I love a poem that tells a story. The most memorable poems are the ones that tell someone's story. I don't care about ratings; the truth is always hated. People are people where-ever we go. more…

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