My oldest daughter



Billie Jo you were my first born

As if you didn't know

Though you've given me some tough times

My love for you still grows.

You were such a pretty child

With your hair so gold and shiny

Maybe things would've been different

If I'd spanked your little heiny.

As I watched you grow up

Before my very eyes

We were not always lucky

To see things eye to eye.

I'm sure there were times

When I could have tried to understand

I wish we could've talked more

To get out lives under hand.

Although we do not always see things eye to eye

I want you to know I've loved you from the start

No matter how much time goes by

You will always be close to my heart.

Now you are a mother

And a young adult

I hope that you've grown wiser

As an end result.

I wish for you my daughter, on your 21st birthday

Peace, courage, wisdom and all of life's best

And that God will always keep you

Closest to His chest.

I will love you forever, Mom

 
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Loraine Russo

Many times, more than I care to mention, even while lying in bed, words come to me about situations I am going through or seeing unfold around me. I usually keep a pad and pen near to write them down as I think of them,lest I forget. Having gone through many horrific times growing up and in my adulthood, I feel I have a lot to offer to those who may have walked in my shoes and don't know which direction to move in. Hopefully it will bring peace of mind knowing that you are not alone. more…

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