Lonely



This loneliness I feel
comes to consume me
day and night,
night and day:
A palpable presence
that I can feel.

I think of our times together;
They will never come again,
so sad.
I remember the good,
and I forget the bad.
But I remain alone.

My heart cries now
to learn the life lesson here.
But I don't know
how to pass the test.
And, until I do,
I will be where I started
when I met you,
But one level lower

of lonely.

Dale Raymond (c) 1/23/2013
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Submitted on August 22, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXXXA CXDXDX XXXXEXEC B
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 424
Words 90
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 8, 1

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