Into our dream made for you and me oh,how I wish I'd be forever asleep



When I close my eyes and
fall into a dream the one
wish I've ever wanted is granted
it seems I finally have you
by side,I finally have you
to be mine all the happiness
and sensations i feel tricks
my mind into thinking it's all
real with each dream that seems
to last forever I'd swear this
time we're really together but
when i wake up and we're apart
i'm filled with devastation deep
in my heart if the only place we
could be is in a dream
than i wish i'd be forever asleep.
Can dream come true for me one
day? If only i could jump away
from reality into a world of dream.
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDDEFGHIJKLMNLBON
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 556
Words 118
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19

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