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Ii shining silence ii

When I reached
In the middle of the road
Stopped to look around
To see something
It was a brilliant in silence
To calculate my laughter
It gets even
To feel my sorrow
It says in pretty
To read my wounds
Distributed over time
Dear held me by the hand patted me on my back
Figured my contract with life
Gave me a grain of love
From the glittering silence
Tired of all my past
Crazy errors
Wildlife and tears
Soul inside
With folded wings woke up
To swim with me
For the rest of my journey
The body it had aged
There are wild
To me his side
But the disgust and weightless
Forget that this earth
The Sun brighten up
Radiant silence closes quick
around me
I fell asleep with the pinhead glow
Covered with condensed sky
To enlighten with soulful eyes
Fully die and fully alive.
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Submitted on January 10, 2013

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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 738
Words 149
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 34

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