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I Want

Subhashchandra Adhav

I Want

I want be the breath
That you take in your nose
And be the beautiful paragraph
In your awesome prose
Be the wick of your candle
And be the smell of your sandle
Be the Moon
To shower on you boon
Be the Sun radiant
To make your face brilliant
Be the valve of your heart
With new throbs to make our love start
In your inner sky,I want be the comet
And dwell there perpetually as your soul mate!
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Submitted on February 24, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCBDDEEFFGGHI
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 384
Words 83
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
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