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I lose My Soul

Margareth Debrosse

I place an ice cube on fire
It melted and it extinguished
the fire.  Either way I lose my
soul.

Shall I touch you? my hands quiver
Hide tide blood inside my heart, desire
peak and lustrous feeling spread.

I place a candle on fire
It liquified and it turned off the fire
Both ways I lose my mind.

Should I hold you tight? my pulse
beat faster and faster, waves of emotion
rise to the sonnet of my heart.

Yes, I place an ice cube on fire
It melted and it extinguished the fire and either
way I lose my soul.

By:  Margareth Debrosse
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Submitted on August 20, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXB AAX AAX XXX AAB X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 513
Words 105
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3, 3, 3, 1
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