I Close My Eyes



when im with you life is grand
things look great from where i stand
i want to hold you but your not here
its hard to love when your minds not clear

i close my eyes i see your face
it takes me to that special place
that i truly need to get away
from the pain and sorrow that i feel every damn day

heres something that i must say
im getting stronger by every passing day
every day when the night comes
it reminds me that im im not alone

you may not know how i feel about you
my feelings are true
i dont have time to be fake
especially when your hearts is at stake
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXX BBCC CCXX DDEE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 546
Words 119
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Christopher Lillian

hello everyone i am christopher lillian i was born december 25 1986. i am very excited to share my poetry with all of you. i would like to get published one day. i take great pride in my work and put my heart and soul into all my poems. writing poetry is one of my greatest passions in life. thank you for taking the time to read my poetry i really appreciate it. so tell me what you think and comment, thank you everyone and enjoy :) more…

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