Gone too far



From a cup of sweet juice I wanted to have a sip,
Instead, I felt down losing my grip,
Starting a lovely and amazing trip,
Toward the unknown on the love ship,
As the time flows, only heaven knows,
What's underneath some far sound of crows,
Whether we've gone too far,
Beyond what's written on the star,
By this thought I feel kinda sick,
For, still, certainty I must seek,
Your mesmerizing face shows through the fog,
And fears, doubt, crouch as a hedgehog,
Positivity, invades me like a tide,
Hope is, again, my only ride,
Your hand and love pulls me up,
And never will I get enough of your lovely cup
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Submitted on November 07, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AAAABBCCDEFFGGHH
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 588
Words 113
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

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