Gods masterpiece





Written in the desert on Desertion
 Gods Masterpiece...

 It violates the rules of
 the Art of Writing
 with absolutely no trace of Humanism
 mocking everyone
 with an absurd use of Exaggeration
 which neither more nor less
 is what the Human Being must silently accept
 and even be pleased
 with his end and his utter demolition...

 And worst of all...
 that afterward Heaven will have the last word
 and like a beast will open its Gates
 to keep the human being
                                           far from the sins of Earth!

 This...God says
 is his obligation to the World
 to take human flesh and bone
 and make them soul...
 but without
 having the right to breath!

 Just as you hear the Procession that accompanies a person
 who leaves behind a crown with barbs
 adorned with complaint and anger
 about this God who brought him into the World
 and now...
 violently imposing his will
 takes him back.
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Submitted on January 05, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX XBXAAXXXA XXXBX XCXXXX AXXCXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 885
Words 152
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 9, 5, 6, 7

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