Go On (verse 3)



people in authority are the majority they have priority
but people in the minority dont get seniority it all points to my inferiority,
but i'll keep goin and write rhymes in my blood if i must,
it's get rich or bust, keep tryin' until my body forever turns to dust,
i don't know what strengthens my blood, but i won't let my life fall,
i gotta get away from the alcohol,
the addiction is killin' me from inside,
i gotta live so i can stand next to my bride,
for all time
immortalize myself in rhyme,
even though i probaly wont get a dime,
but in the end i'll go back to where i began,
minus the silly grin, and i'll talk to my kin,
ask them how they been, and tell them all about my sin,
so they can go on
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Submitted on May 28, 2016

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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 691
Words 142
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15

Wayne O'Brien

I grew up in a trailer park in fairly rough town and saw drugs and many many gangs everyday. I was introduced to drugs death and street life at an early age while blessed/cursed with vivid dreams, many have come to pass. After the suicide of my first girlfriend I became addicted to cocaine and free-base and experimented with many other drugs. I quit those on Sept. 12 2001 (my senior year in high school) and have been clean sense(woot) and found God several years later. Many of my poem are a direct honest account of my past, although there are some poems of mine here that are actually songs I wrote. I can be blunt and honest, so that's all I'm saying here for now. read my poetry and songs and tell me what you think. Be blunt and honest like me :) more…

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