Giving paradise



Didn´t give paradise

I didn´t give paradise
 No heaven from my hand´s no!
 I could have done better
 But not with you sweets

 Was it god or a demon that told me
 I didn´t need to furnish paradise?
 Shall I pretend
 To know

 Oh what I could have provided
 Take it out of my flesh sweet hearts
 For a man wanting good am I
 For a man wanting right is this

 Did I offer as much as I suffer
 Take it out of me there´s little left

 Father do I dwindle do I offer you less
 Your definition of satisfactory
 I didn´t give paradise
 Will you show me hell thus?
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Submitted on April 16, 2015

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Scheme a Abcx daxb xxxx cx xdAx
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 570
Words 116
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 2, 4

Simon Elliott

Throughapoetseye.blogspot.comSimon Bernard Elliott.International poetry.It´s about creativity and real expression.I am a traveller, I´ve lived all over the world. Always in close proximity to nature and poetry. I´ve written since I was sixteen now I am 31. I aim to open people´s eyes with my poetry. I aim to entertain and also to provoke reactions. If I can do any of these things- I think the hours spent writing will all be worth it. more…

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