Discovery



Well, you finally did it
Though you fussed and fought
Kicking nearly every step of the way
Once I turned you loose
There was no holding you back
Watching as you tore through the grass
I saw you discover a new found freedom
And declare a form of independence
I knew right then and there
That what had fell into your tiny little grasp
Would never be let go
I could see in those little eyes
Just barely five years old
A stronger burning fire
Than I’ve seen in eyes ten times as old
It was the first time I knew for sure
My little girl would be all right
No matter where life’s path might lead
For in that instant of discovery
You did so much more
Than learn to ride a bike
You tasted what having freedom
And independence brings to life

NOTE*** This is from my CD A Father’s Love Letters
To listen to the CD please visit
http://www.reverbnation.com/#/mikehamill
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XXXXXXAXXXXXBXBXXXXXXAX XXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 838
Words 165
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 23, 3

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