Broken Promises Part 11 ( Poem No.533)
Broken Promises Part 11
Please depart from my view
And never give me that pity look
Like you're begging for mercy
To take your heart back to hook.
I don't want you to discover,
That I still love you and care.
I just want to keep this secret
to myself till my last breath.
I have love you with all my heart,
There was no gap between us
since from the very start.
Then suddenly come to full stop;
For one of us have fallen away from our path...
It's time now to say goodbye.
Thank you for showing me
Not to trust in promises and alibis;
as I had trusted in yours... that went bye- bye....
By Ms. Ging
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Submitted by ging_a on October 01, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | A XBCB XXXX AXAXX DCXD X |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 580 |
Words | 120 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 4, 4, 5, 4, 1 |
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